Now...

by halie   Nov 2, 2007


Now that Ur gone,
i finally see how much you just weren't right 4 me
one day I'll find my guy but until then I'll sit here and wait... for as long as it takes

now that your gone,
i finally see how bad you treated me
you played me like all the rest i thought i was different but you played With my head, heart, and mind....

and now i look back and all i can say is I'm glad your gone

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  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Nice work i love it keep ur work up

  • 16 years ago

    by A F

    Hun, don't waste your tears on someone who won't shed a single drop of tear for you.
    Be strong (:

    xxx.

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Yeah, feels good to write a poem like this, doesn't it =]? But I suggest you make some.. eh, paragraphs in it. That way it'll look more like a poem =] Anyway, nicely done. 4/5
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    This is really good.
    sounds like something i would write

    well done =)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by chickadee

    Not judging you by your age but that poem had alot of emotion and was written very well very impressed good job

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