Pretty good to read this. Simple to say those thing wen somebody feel played.

Not judging you by your age but that poem had alot of emotion and was written very well very impressed good job

This is really good.
sounds like something i would write

well done =)
5/5

Yeah, feels good to write a poem like this, doesn't it =]? But I suggest you make some.. eh, paragraphs in it. That way it'll look more like a poem =] Anyway, nicely done. 4/5
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Hun, don't waste your tears on someone who won't shed a single drop of tear for you.
Be strong (:

xxx.

Nice work i love it keep ur work up