This poem was very unique but so beautiful. I loved the emotion I saw in this. You could see your heart writing this poem as you were reading it... I enjoyed every moment of it. Keep it up!

Definately a unique poem that held a lot of power and emotion. I often feel that we all shape the lives of sombody close to us and we never fully realize the impact we have. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

Brings me back to art class in jr high :). I would set the stanzas apart though to make it easier to read even tho it's a shorter poem :) I really like it tho

Its was simply short but direct to the point. the message has a great expression and great imagery, those thoughts and words was really well express 5/5 keep it up

To the point, loved it. loved the imagery and how you conveyed the topic.
5/5

This poem has a different theme
which is why i really liked it.

i like the artistic inspiration.

wonderful.

you are an amazing writer.

I liked the theme on this, and the way you portrayed it was amazing, there are just a few things i'd like to point out.

First off:
"The arcs I make defines if she's okay
Though her face expressions are deceiving."
These two lines have a few grammar mistakes, for instance, on the first line, "defines" should be "define". and on the second, "face" should be "facial".

Now, moving on to the rhyme scheme, it was good. But i have a large problem (and i see this a lot in others) where you will have a word that rhymes, but you'll make it plural.. it doesn't rhyme after that! so, what i would do if i were you, is, on this line, "I decide the outfit she displays" since "displays" is supposed to rhyme with "say", you should change how the line is worded, heres an example, "I decide the outfit she'll display". Then "display" and "say" rhyme again. :]
Great job though,
5/5 still.