by firexdancer Nov 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Weakly, for drained I am of every strength, |
by Melpomene
I absolutely loved this poem. All I can say is Wow. Honestly. This poem something about the emotion portrayed really ripped at my heart and portrayed sadness and beauty both at the same time. It's elegance captured my soul and the word choice was breath taking. The flow was a tiny touch off in some places but nothing to completely reuin this poem. This was beautiful. Well done. ~Mel |