Look Around

by Chris   Nov 3, 2007


If you stop and take a look you could smile all around,
for theres beauty in the sky and theres art that walks the ground.
Were all beautiful in some way and full of love and light,
thou sometimes evil lurks it should never blur our sight.
Theres a bigger picture here although you may not know it now,
you'll see it clearly one day just dont wait till your the clouds.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda

    Me like this one too, lol. It's very truthful in some ways too bad society hasn't made it to that stage...if you know what I mean. Well, this one is a good poem too.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked that it flowed really good together.it could use some work and better grammor like the other one had mentioned already and it would be sooo great but i did like it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    This is a very beautiful poem. I loved the smooth flow of it and the concept of it. I also loved the use of imagery that you created. It has a few grammar errors though; and you need to check you punctuation in some areas. But, overall, this was a fantastic poem and I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing your gift.

    Letty

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