Comments : Sweet Music

  • 16 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    Oh! This is very nice! Very detailed description with amazing choice of words combined... The imagery and the tenderness in this poem is touching...

    For her music doesn't lie,
    It comes from raw emotion,
    Untouched by the tongue of lies,
    Almost pure.

    Beautiful! You express such beautiful emotions even though it isn't a happy emotion...