I can't see anymore...

by Mr Rhee   Nov 3, 2007


My heart stopped yesterday,
when you looked at me that way.
There was a tear in your eye,
and your lips were in a pout.

I had to catch my breath,
when you kissed me last night.
You whispered in my ear,
something you've never said before.

My hand trembled again,
when you put it on your heart.
I could feel everything you had,
all you wanted to give me.

I couldn't see anymore,
when you wiped the tears from my eyes.
You said you were leaving me,
but you just didn't know how to say goodbye.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww!!..how sad!!!!!!!....wow...really sad..u worte this really good!..great job.
    Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow, so touching
    wonderful picture
    i love it and loved the ending too much

  • 16 years ago

    by Neil Marsden

    Brilliant, sad, lonely, full of love and pain.

    Neil.