Comments : Here I lay...

  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    hey, great poem! keep it up

  • 20 years ago

    by Jacob Davis

    thanx peeps.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    i was gunna paste the parts i like about htis poem, but its basically the whole thing, so ill just let you know, you did so well, with this...i love the imagry and emotion you gave in this poem, i love the way you write...and i like your hair...lol
    lee nicole

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    i was gunna paste the parts i like about htis poem, but its basically the whole thing, so ill just let you know, you did so well, with this...i love the imagry and emotion you gave in this poem, i love the way you write...and i like your hair...lol
    lee nicole