Beautiful poem. So many emotions you put in this and they where really clear. Ryhmed perfect and flow was flawless!
5/5 for sure! :)

Nice poem,, the flow is ok, n i like your wording,, good choice of words... The ryhmes is a additional point which make this poem more beautiful,,
Good job,,
Keep up the good work..
5/5

Great poem. The word choice is good but some of the rhyming sounds a little forced but its still well written.

You changed your poem style throughout your piece. for ex. the first 4 lines are all rhyming, while the rest are only the second sentences.
still liked it.

This poem was good but it confused me. it felt as if it jumped around a bit.
sorry for being harsh
but it is my own opinion.
Sam Mayo

This poem is good for sure. I like the word choice but I think some lines need some kinda adjustments. Fort instance "And that's the reason (why)I'm blue" and other lines which the reader may feel little ambiguios or difficult to understand. Your poem is cohesive but the element of coherence is 95%.

Overall a good poem

Tc
Fsams

Good poem, lot of raw emotion in there, 5/5

I absolutely love your rhyming.. but as in the last one, (I didn't say anything then) I never find rhyming the word "blue" powerful. because one its a weak discriptive word.. and its .. idk .. you rhymed it well. but blue.. has never been a strong word. other than that your rhyming is amazing. the only other compliant is:

But your mind is set on another chosen

it doesnt make sense.. how about:

But your mind is set; you have chosen

great job

5/5