WOW a trully emotional poem which i loved and I can relate to with so much truth YOUR AN AWSOME POET 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Wowww. you can really make your words come to life. this was amazingly beautiful in every way. i loved every word!

There was a time when I believed love was pleasant.
But now I think that it's just too painful.
Sometimes love is Cruel, sometimes it's Kind.
It's cruelty gives you pain,
but it's kindness gives you second chances.

this was my favorite stanza. it was worded wisely. especially the last line. you did a fantastic job with this one. 5/5.

-Ashlei.