Comments : Winter Flower

  • 17 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    What an absoutely breathtaking read, unashamed passion, near perfect imaging that allowed journey along throughout, sadness is gorgeous, and ignorance is bliss, so well crafted, a genuinely worthy read, that left me more than satisfied...ROCK!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohh holy crap..I LOVE this.

    This is BEAUTIFUL.

    Your opening stanza is so beautifully detailed and really pulls the reader right into the piece, and from thereon it just gets better and better as it goes along.

    The use of imagery in this is breathtaking, I found it to be very vivid and pretty, and the ending was beautifully written, very intense and hard hitting.

    Love this!