Your right it doesn't make alot of sense but neither does depression. I think what you got going is really great you might want to move stuff around and give it a quick rewrite if your not adding more. Let me know when your finished with it and ill rate and comment it then. My "Stripped of my Sense" is about depression, if you want to give it a read. This has potential to be amazing, keep it going. ~Zach

Loved it. (-_-) huhuhu dam*