by Mr Rhee Nov 3, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Give me your heart. Give me your soul. Give me your visions and dreams. I'll even take your hopes. I might even take your blood. |
by SolemnWish
It was short sorry |
by Ken
Even tho it was short i still felt the emotion from it. It was just right 5/5*. |
by sweet escape
I like it..... it is just dark enough....check out my poems plz |
by Neil Marsden
Great read, brim full of emotions both good and bad. Back from years away from writing, dont leave it 20 yrs again or we wont be able to understand you quite so well! |
by Sweet lig
Hmm.. what a great piece! i just noticed that ur past still u cant let it go... hmm am i right?coz i really felt the emotions was truly undeniable hehe.. well i can relate at the same time coz of those few lines seems related to me.. the message was powerful and very well expressed.. u had really showed ur deep emotions here perfectly.. keep on writing all what u feel .... great job 5/5 |