Even though it was kinda short i liked it alot and how you put emotion in to it 4/5

Man that was so deep. I always love your poems Mr. Rhee! Keep up the awesome work!

Oh wow. I can feel hate yet sadness. This is a very good poem.

5/5

Hmm.. what a great piece! i just noticed that ur past still u cant let it go... hmm am i right?coz i really felt the emotions was truly undeniable hehe.. well i can relate at the same time coz of those few lines seems related to me.. the message was powerful and very well expressed.. u had really showed ur deep emotions here perfectly.. keep on writing all what u feel .... great job 5/5

its me,
Sweet lig

Great read, brim full of emotions both good and bad. Back from years away from writing, dont leave it 20 yrs again or we wont be able to understand you quite so well!
Neil.

I like it..... it is just dark enough....check out my poems plz

Even tho it was short i still felt the emotion from it. It was just right 5/5*.

It was short sorry
but it was good
MAybe you can do an updated version in the future?
5/5