Cold Hell

by kmx210   Nov 3, 2007


Dark room...Summer starts to bloom....the flowers...
Winter starts in summer....I begin to sink under.....
The closed walls I'm in....why am i sinking in.....
Is this hell....why is it so cold....This isn't what i chose.
COLD HELL
Why can`t I see you....Are you there....am i blind
I`ll just pretend to hug you....until you come back true.
No...No...No...i cant see you....Please...Its cold....Please..
this isn't what i chose...is this hell..i cant see out of this
Cold HELL
I`ll just lay here until you come back...Until you return.
Its cold, but your words burn....I know...Oh NO....Please
NO....It cant be....where are did you leave....Please
I cant see....Why does it burn...I need you right now.
My eyes...YOUR LIES...Its your turn...Your turn. .........
To feel the cold burn. I didn't know that I would be.....
trapped in this cold hell.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Wow...
    I actually really like this.
    It was so serious and emotional.
    The pain radiated and I was interested to keep reading.
    The form of it at first sight was a little bit of a negative but after I read it I had to read it again because I loved it...
    5/5, well deserved!