by Ashley Nov 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Whatever happened to that little girl? |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a good poem but I would suggest to try to put in into stanzas.. it will really enhance this piece. |
Hey, i luv that poem. it reminds me of my life... great work 5/5 |
Wow.... a very heartfelt and moving poem.... |