Humanity.

by Fluffy   Nov 3, 2007


Is this dream, so vast within my grasp?
Am I immune to the distraught behind me,
cursed by a miraculous magic? Among me
there are those who never speak from the
heart, but hiss through their pure, white bricks
in caves. Yet, they are the ones who hold my
hand on journey's so distant and poison my
mind with bitter-sweet stories and forged
fairy-tales. I can walk miles, though my fingers
will not unfold, for the colossal yet refined force
of humanity clutches me. Nature is a far calling;
daunting but luring are the thuds my mind is
vulnerable to
obstruct.
One day, and perhaps one day; I shall
open these eyes of a dying emerald and shatter
the hopes of my mother.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this...this is BEAUTIFUL.

    So much depth and meaning packed into a relatively short piece, while the imagery you painted throughout created such stunning and vivid visuals for me.

    Your flow in this is FLAWLESS, it doesn't falter once. The words just roll right from my tounge.

    I LOVE the ending..I certainly didn't see that coming, and it was filled with so much intensity that it hits the reader like a slap in the face.

    Amazing work on this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shyguy

    Woo
    that was really ya know complicated
    anyways for a poem like that you deserve 10/5 votes
    very well done!
    farooq

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Phew it's too deep that I have to read it again! :) but anyway it your choice of words really amazes me.. it's like magic :) well done. I think the flow was smooth, good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

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