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Phew it's too deep that I have to read it again! :) but anyway it your choice of words really amazes me.. it's like magic :) well done. I think the flow was smooth, good job.

Woo
that was really ya know complicated
anyways for a poem like that you deserve 10/5 votes
very well done!
farooq

I love this...this is BEAUTIFUL.

So much depth and meaning packed into a relatively short piece, while the imagery you painted throughout created such stunning and vivid visuals for me.

Your flow in this is FLAWLESS, it doesn't falter once. The words just roll right from my tounge.

I LOVE the ending..I certainly didn't see that coming, and it was filled with so much intensity that it hits the reader like a slap in the face.

Amazing work on this.