Great :O)

This poem was so emotional. I loved every second of reading it. The emotions were so true, and I felt pity for the girl in the poem. So sad. 5/5

Tha poem was different but good 5/5

This is heartbraking!!! its amazing but sad!! great job!! :):)

Great poem <33 but its so sad ..

Yah love it though sad,,
love the ryming
i enjoy reading your worksz..
lol,,eep it up!

dirtyhands