by TwiztidJuggalette Nov 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Why did you have to leave? |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
Wow!A truly amazing poem.Loved it!I didn't really like the way it was set up but other then that it was an excellent poem(no suprise :D)Anyways 5/5 from me again. |
by abcede
Hey... i love that you're getting out all of your emotions... just try to make it flow a little more:) |
by Sweet lig
Hmm i like the message it was very touch piece! the essence of this poet was really great and i think it has great dedication to everyone! just keep on writing all what u feel im sure it helps u alot to express ur feelings for writing it. great job keep it up! nice flow and it well written 5/5 |
Ecellent poem very heartfelt and true, the words really touch the reader especially if they've experienced the same pain. The whole thing about not knowing what you have until it's gone comes into play, and how easily and fast it can all be taken away. Great job 5/5 GG23 |
by Veamm
Good! |