I wonder

by InvisibleHourglass   Nov 4, 2007


What did we do wrong?
why did others escape?
while we suffered?
why bother try to hide it?
we all know.
Why am i bothered?
my mind such a wreck?
my dreams so shaken?
I'd tell you what scares me.
But all you'd do is tell me it's OK.
It's not OK.
I don't need that.
I will be the judge of my fears.

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  • 15 years ago

    by InvisibleHourglass

    Ah as C said, (DER) uninked, unwritten.

  • 17 years ago

    by InvisibleHourglass

    I'd still like to know what it means. That way at least the dictionary will have some definitions. ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    And in my haste, I forgot to write my comment on your poem! (DER) True, what is ok to one, invariably never is to anyone else! Again, you speak of your inner thoughts, and rightly so, only I can own my fears, and only you can own yours. Well done. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Lol.. you two are so funny.. uninked.. no.. not even unpenned (although surely it must be the reverse of penned..).. Maybe, as poets, you should write to the commision for dictionaries, and get it added!!

  • 17 years ago

    by InvisibleHourglass

    Uninked. I'll consider it a word..... if you tell me what it means.