That's simply beautiful. Very easy read, nice rhythm and rhyme. Sweet poem. Em xx

Glad you've posted again! I've missed your poetry.....Nice rhymes, short, sweet and sad....hope to read more soon!

Rachel
How nice to see a poem from you again. What a beautiful yet sad piece.

Warmth of hand
Tender touch
Memories, fantasies
Miss you much

This stanza really tugged at my heart. How hard it is to miss someone we love. So much pain and so many tears.
Excellent job!
Love you Cindy

Hey Rachel,

this is really a very beautiful poem, its so short and simple yet so meaningful and so deep. its really nice to be back on site and reading such beautiful poem after so long.

all the best and take care

Loved it. (-_-)

Rachel,

You manage to say so much with so few words! It makes the poem very powefull...
I feel like this too, I wish I had written it,lol!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

LOVED IT!

Beautiful poem!! definetly 5/5:)

Simple words, such strong emotion and meaning, flowed very easily, wouldn't change a word, beautiful work, keep it up

My olny wish is to be as good as u 1 day of my life

hope u can read some of mine!<333

Wow that was pretty amazing

Amazing.
It's so simple a child could understand it, but at the same time there is a complex meaning behind it.
Very well done.

This is beautiful... I can tell you write straight from your heart.I loved it.

-LoverOfTheRain

I really enjoyed reading your poem,
with the words you used it was like you sed so much in so little
this is the first poem of your's that i have read i must say you left a great impression
i look forward to reading someothers by you
5/5
xx hope

It was short and sweet. i liked it a lot =)

I love it.. kinda sounds like me and my man which is locked up right now that is the way i feel i just never could put it in words

Ok you want to know what i love about this poem? ill tell you lol
i love how you have to read into you can't just read the words and totally get it you made it deeper than that and i love it : ) 5/5 <3

I think this piece was a little too simple, for me anyway. I don't like complicated poems, but this just didn't tell enough, I feel. As with all your piece I've read and commented on, with the exception of one, your first stanza was the best, I particularly liked the last line of the first stanza 'Miss you much'.

Brad

This poem was too short.Your supposed to make the reader feel the emotion of your poetry.I felt nothing.It was as if I blinked and then it was over.Nice rhyming though.