When I'm with you

by alwayssofresh16   Nov 4, 2007


When your arms are around me
its like no one else is there
and when you are not with you
its like something I can't bare

My feelings about you are real
like when your lips touch mine
I get a different feeling
that I question all the time

like why your kiss is so different
not like any other kiss
I don't know what to do or say
because I never felt like this

so keep on making me feel safe
hold me close and tight
put your warm body on mine
just make me feel all right

If you comment be as honest as you can be so I can know what to work on.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love your poems, continue to write. By the way, thanks for commenting on my poem!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel

    I love it I hope u continue writing keep up the good work!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by GraCiE

    Me again......i love your poems!!!! they are sooo real and i can relate to them sooo well. keep up the good work

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