I think it is strongly expressed and i love that about it. I can almost hear someone yelling within the poem.
great job 5/5 keep writing =]

Love it, its so beautiful

I sense a great anger in this piece, I love the tone of the poem it shows your emotions throughout this poem, well done.

I have one suggestion to improve this poem. Try to use more punctuations.

Nonetheless a great poem.
Thanks for the comment :)