Beautiful poem, I liked the repetition of thouse do lines, making whole poem so powerful! And like it flowed just perfectly! The emotions were so strong. Hope you feeling better soon.
5/5 Loved this, Keep it up!

I love the structure, though the message is sad, its really really good. I got like a awesome screamo song out of it but maybe thats just me. haha. Keep up the good work. ~Zach

Good lord that actually gave me chills, no word of a lie. It was a stunning poem, very powerful imagery there. Nice work xx

Wonderful poems, good emotion, repition was great, fantastic write keep it up.

Good structure and flow.. again another sad piece but pain can be a good source of material to write about and also good motivation to do so..

Wow.
i usually only like poems that rhyme but thisis amazing!!!!! i LOVE it. 5/5 <3

Oh my god
You're really an amazing writer
I love your poems.

I like this poem bcos it could mean about almost anything... and i can realte to it.. =]

great work..

5/5

Great poem, i liked it,5/5