Good poem. Wonderfully written and I loved the structure.

It flowed very nicely but sometimes the rhyming seemed forced.

The repetition of "Just forget about it" was very effective because it emphasized the title.

Good Job. 5/5

-Shannon <3

Great poem.I loved the repitition and the meaning.The ryhmes were simple,yet it worked for this poem.Try correcting some grammar and spelling.A 5/5 overall.

Keep writing,
Miranda

I like this poem, it feels like you put alot of time and effort into it. I hope you continue to right. :)

Nice. Straight to the point. Tell it as it is. Nice flow, nice rhyme. 3/5

Simply deep. I love it. 5/5 from me!!!

Well done! The rhyming was perfect and the theme stayed consistent. Only thing I would have to say are mechanical errors: "you're" instead of "your" and "we're" instead of "were." Other than those petty complaints though, great job!

This was wonderful!! My favorite poem that I've read all day! It was really deep, had a nice flow, I loved it! It was really deep. 5/5 for sure!