by alwayssofresh16 Nov 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
I finally lost something |
by butterfly
Wow that was AWESOME you have talent |
by Morgan
That poem is so real and true it made me remember my first time |
by mehul
Hey girl it is really heart crying ur having real talent in this age oh my god wen u will be grown u can win big poetry award get on & go with it... |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a great poem, I really like the story in it... Anyway to improve this I would suggest you to use 'descriptive words' so the reader can really picture the poem. Anyway keep up the good work! |
by PennyM850
You put that into words very well. It was easy to read. The only thing I thought you could improve on was the ending. It just seemed to stop abruptly. But, very good. |