by Choose xX Alex Xx Life Nov 4, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Soft whispers; The wind of death. |
by NearlyCrazy6
Wow. that was really good. The only thing i can say was to make the rhyming a little bit less forced..but thats me of course. I love this poem it is awesome. Be sure to check out mine! |
by The Herald
Not just best poem today, best poem ever. wow, thats all i can say wow.... it was just like, mind blowing. i am....so sad.............im literaly writing this with tears streaming down my face... |
by Anonymous
Heart-felt. I like it. Sad, but real. Great choice of words. mediocre flow, could use a little more rhyme (but that's just my preference) |