Clamlike

by Catastrophic Beauty   Nov 4, 2007


Keeping your feelings bottled up inside
Wearing a mask to hide everything
Why?
Just tell me what's bothering you

It hurts me so much to see you in pain
Knowing I'm incapable of helping you
Because you won't let me unmask yourself
But I can't just sit back and watch

Are you afraid?
Do you think I'm going to tell people?
Have some trust in me, please
I'm only here because I love you

But maybe you don't believe I do
Is that it?
Come on, have some common sense
I'm not here to destroy you

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I know it's not very good, but I just had to let it out.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    A wonderful write. I'll admit it's not your best but it was still amazing. Because you wrote it from your heart and that's all that matters. Lovely job. :) Overall: 5.5

    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This is a really good poem. You did a good job with this. Definately on my favs. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I think this one is not one of ur best idid not actually enjoyed well i will try to read some.. i dont rate this one coz i dont like to give a down rates. anyway god bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    The name really had nothing to do with the poem, but it was pretty good. i liked it, the flow wasnt on target but the wording was good. 4-5

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