Faith At The Crossroads (Collab)

This poem had me confused at first but at the end the cumclusin was rlly goo. i felt it was a bit forced in da middle.. but this poem had great potemtial

This reminds me of something that I've written before I think. I like the questions you asked in this and the imagery you created within it. I've felt such love in the poems I have read of yours, it is really sweet to read. I like the concept in this too.. it is somewhat original. Nice write.

Tammie

I loved it! We all come to a split road and do not know which route to take. Some seem appealing while others scare the bee gees out of us. The way you protrayed this confused emotion was beautiful. The last stanza was a beautiful way to end your poem. Well done *5/5*

It's been a while since I read some of your work, reading this now, reminded me why I missed it so much!
You are a very talented person, with beautiful poems as a result.
the poem had, for me a powerful message which I think deserves a 5/5

thanks for the read,
~* Natasha *~

My thoughts are sort of dazed.
In the distance I see a light,
I shall choose the left.
For maybe this road will lead me back to you.

I really enjoyed that stanza. I feel the powerful thing there and I really enjoyed the emotion you put in this poem. Well written poem from you. It deserves 5/5.