As Dark as the Moon (Haiku)

Short but it has soo many stuff filled in it! i LOVE the first sentence it makes me smile for it's an oxymorron of sorts... the imagery in this poem is WONDERFUL my dear trust me and although i don't sence any emotions i could be wrong but still i like this piece! :)

Queen Ash

Well ... well ... well!

3 little lines, thats all it is. Packed with such a punch it hits you like dynamite. You have most definitely found a groove with your haiku's. You write them to perfection.

I think this one for me is made as good as it is simply by the first line.
"Sunshine bleeds cold tears"
Wonderful line - you could have just said "chicken" 10 times after that line. It's a complete showstopper of a line.

Again, very nice work!

~Pete.

This seems like it could be longer, it's still nice though, filled with emotion. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Oh holy crap...I don't even know what I could possibly say that would even begin to sum up how I feel about this piece..

This is just amazing. Oh wow...

"Of angel's bitter heartbreak"

^^How I loved that line. That line really spoke to me.

So deep and meaningful and filled with so much depth and power, as is the hole poem.

This..is perfect.

Wow, this poem seems to me as very powerful. the words r very deep in this..
loved it.. rated this a 5