by alwayssofresh16 Nov 5, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
I live for him each day |
by Liz
My fiance and I both work and i dont get to see him much, i love your poem, it did what a poem is supposed to do and thats take the reader to that place or feeling that have felt or want to feel. Flow and Rhyme scheme good. 5/5 ^.^ |
Love it=) |
by Nigel Oliver
This was very nice, |
Very good poem. You should put it into stanzas so it could look better. 4/5 for now. |
by jordan
This is a very good poem. i feel this way for my bofriend. |