I miss it when you...

by alwayssofresh16   Nov 5, 2007


I live for him each day
and I breath for him each night
but he's been away from me so long
and each day is just a fight

temptation is quickly building up
the feeling is so immense
I want for him to come back soon
because my bodies growing tense

I want for us to become one
our bodies together again
his hands in all my places
like they were way back then

his tender voice whispering
"what do you want me to do"
and me always telling him
"what ever you want to"

I miss when we would reach our peaks
and both let out a moan
me telling him I love him
him and his heartfelt tone

I miss when I would favor him
and he would favor me
I miss it when he'd tell me
that we were meant to be

I miss his lips the way they touch
the way he takes me there
I'm missing him so much
the temptation I can't bare

If you comment be as honest as can be so I know what I need to work on.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    My fiance and I both work and i dont get to see him much, i love your poem, it did what a poem is supposed to do and thats take the reader to that place or feeling that have felt or want to feel. Flow and Rhyme scheme good. 5/5 ^.^

  • 16 years ago

    by anonymous lyrell

    Love it=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    This was very nice,
    I can relate to this a lot.
    Your rhyming scheme was really good, and the flow was flawless.
    5/5

  • Very good poem. You should put it into stanzas so it could look better. 4/5 for now.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by jordan

    This is a very good poem. i feel this way for my bofriend.

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