Wow, Bianx.. this is such a powerful poem. It took my breath away as I read it. The way you used your words were magical, some things you said I haven't even seen until I read this poem. You have a talent, use it the best you can! I personally love this poem and I can relate to it in soo many ways imaginable. The only thing I would change about it is maybe adding things in like periods at the ends of lines.. =) Just so the poem looks a lot more professional. Keep it up!! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~