by the simple girl Nov 5, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Everything you're doing, |
Excellent poem great message if more people lived like that the world would be a better place. |
by HaileyHelen
WOAH!...... Im like.... blown away! i connected with this piece! really beautiful piece! great job! |
by Natasha
I think you might be right on the comment: best thus far. I Loved it! a very good message came across to me, your reader. |
by Ciao Bella
Very unique poem i find and its really well writen :) goodjob |
by HaileyHelen
I love!!!!! the repitition throughout it just brings the poem alive! I liked it alot! |