Simple but really great!!! I love it!!

I love!!!!! the repitition throughout it just brings the poem alive! I liked it alot!

Very unique poem i find and its really well writen :) goodjob

Ashleigh

I think you might be right on the comment: best thus far. I Loved it! a very good message came across to me, your reader.
Very good!

thanks,
~* natasha *~

WOAH!...... Im like.... blown away! i connected with this piece! really beautiful piece! great job!

Excellent poem great message if more people lived like that the world would be a better place.