I love this poem
Well done

though the world cancel does nt suit in here, cancel thoughts does not make sense to me

Rest the poem is wonderful in strcuture:-)
5/5

take good care,
Roxiee

Ohhhh... I love this... It is equally filled with sadness and captivating yet painful beauty. Greatly written piece, with so vivid and effective imagery. This truly touched me in many ways and I can relate to the feelings that you excellently portrayed.
The repetitions added amazing effect to the whole poem.
Keep up!
5/5 from me

Althought this peice was short the emotion held within every word was amazing. I loved it. I felt the pain and that was great. Again, great job!
5/5

Amber...

I loved it
5/5
:)

This is really good. It has good ummmmm (this is wat u get 4 not payin attention in english) IMAGERY its really good. and canceling happy thoughts never thought of it that way.....

PLZ rate soma mine.....THANKS