This is the first piece of yours I've read that is written with loving and tenderness in mind, I've almost become used to reading poetry filled with darkness and dismay from you now.
This shows a rather refershingly upbeat change in mood.
As per usual it's immaculately written, filled with wonderful sentiment. Not quite as image filled as usual but still a thoroughly enjoyable read.

Another great piece.

~Pete.

This is such a moving poem!! and it is so true!! mothers will do ANYTHING for their kids and will be there for them every step of the way!! i love this poem a LOT!!