Maybe you should,
ask your wife,
she would understand,

I Can't do that,
I've an E-girl,
Behind my good wife's back,

lol ;)
thanks for taking time to rrc on my poem.
this was an awesome write cause it makes sense.
keep it up

Hmm seems like a song! a bit funny,rocky,groovy hehe! it was too long but still u impress readers! nice one5/5

Ha! I really like this one. .. But again.. all those dang COMMAS. You don't need that many .. wah. Well I HOPE you fix that. Because everything else is perfect. You did an amazing job at keeping the beat. I thought "with such small lines its not going to go smoothly." but you pulled it off. Great job :) I loved the story. Great rhyming.

Overall

5/5

Keep up the great stuff

Light hearted, witty and enjoyable.

I'm not sure why it is so long though, I think you'll get the point across just as well by dropping one or two of the not so funny callers and staying concise.

By reading this poem alone you're obviously smart, know what you want to convey and you don't need to procrastinate to get that point across. Use that ability.

I'll be reading more.

Bret

Lol. This one was funny. My grandfather works for fujitsu and he goes and answers calls all over oregon. he has some funny stories. guess you don't care much. but i liked the poem.

Lol I have to laugh because my friend works in collections for Telus and some of the calls and excuses she gets are hilarious and ridiculous. Again it was good, but the flow was a bit off for me.

This was rather amusing, that job would get so frustrating. I thought the flow was a bit off in times, and the commas are still there but it was written fairly well. Something I haven't read about before, which is always good. Good job.

Tammie

Ha ha, this is pretty funny. ^_^
I loved it!
5/5<---wish I could give it more!

.:CiNdY:.

LOL thats funny!! 5/5!! XD