by my demons Nov 5, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I ask the blind puppeteer |
by Rocky
Looking at your other poems i would say this is easily your best one. you should write like this more often. a poem should be formed around your ideas and feelings. not your ideas made to conform to a certain structure or rhyme. |
by Rocky
Why is this not a poem. a poem dosnt have to rhyme or be in a certain structure. i say this is a damn good poem. it is unusual which makes it interesting its not like alot of generic crap most people write. anyway i loved the message behind it how it is so much easier to dance to other peoples tune than make your own. excelent work |
This was awesome! it may not have been a poem but it was great! excellent work |
Amazing. |
by Empty Space
Wonderfully written!:D |