The Boy Who Wanted To Be A Real Puppet

by my demons   Nov 5, 2007


I ask the blind puppeteer
could i buy your puppet
could i dance on its strings
no says the man
you are not a puppet
i do not dance with boys
just puppets

Could i be your puppet old man
i could dance on strings
you could paint me how ever you wished
you could make me act
bring me to life

no son you aren't a puppet you can move on your own
you move think talk and act of your own accord
you will not fit in with the other puppets
you will not be a good puppet you will break

All there pieces fit in perfect order
your pieces fall about you with each step
they have hearts of gold while yours rusts
go home boy you are not a puppet

i wish for strings to wrap around me
to control my movement
i wish to dance to a puppet master
and smile with the other puppets

I am a boy sir, who wished to be a real puppet
At that moment i felt the pull of the strings
and smiling let go of my humanity
now i dance to strings with a heart made of rusted gold

eternally on the shelf no different from other puppets waiting for my turn to dance before my rusted heart fades...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Rocky

    Looking at your other poems i would say this is easily your best one. you should write like this more often. a poem should be formed around your ideas and feelings. not your ideas made to conform to a certain structure or rhyme.

  • 15 years ago

    by Rocky

    Why is this not a poem. a poem dosnt have to rhyme or be in a certain structure. i say this is a damn good poem. it is unusual which makes it interesting its not like alot of generic crap most people write. anyway i loved the message behind it how it is so much easier to dance to other peoples tune than make your own. excelent work

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    This was awesome! it may not have been a poem but it was great! excellent work

  • 16 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Amazing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Wonderfully written!:D