by Matt Nov 5, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The land of roses |
by my demons
Good work i liked it.... |
by Ben
I enjoyed this one, despite the sadness. This flows ever so well. It keeps you reading because it just flows from one word to the other. |
by Pamela G
I enjoy reading your short poems, great job. |
by ali
This is really good, sad but good, the repetition emphasises the emotion of the piece making it stronger overall. |