by alwayssofresh16 Nov 5, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I see him from across the room |
by Nigel Oliver
This was really good, the flow worked really well. |
Very beautiful poem, but it had the grammatical errors, also. "Wounder" is spelled "wonder" and there are a few other words. Good poem though. 4/5 |
by Whitney
Its really good.. i love it. 5/5 |