Again, the flow was off and there were grammatical errors. If you put these into stanzas, it would look better. 3/5 for now.

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You made some grammar errors in your poem.

The flow of the poem should be better.
And the format of your poem could be better

If you fixed that this poem would be an ok poem..

I think that you need to go over some mistakes here in grammer and spelling. Although that, the idea of this poem is something many can relate to. Nice work 4/5

I fixed the grammer and put this one in stanzas... thnx for the help

I put this poem together the way it is for a reason but thanks for the advice