by Fsams
Lovely love poem I like the imagery and the short wordings convey a great message. Plx correct the spelling of doubt/dought |
by Adelle
This poem flows well and has a lot of emotion I like the story it is telling over all a very good piece 5/5 |
Aww, very B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L poem. I totally loved it. The feeling I got was just amazing. I'm definately gonna put this poem on my favs. Great job. 5/5 all the way. |
by Nigel Oliver
I loved this poem. |
by Shinobi
It's true, even if there's an age difference, it doesn't mean there shouldn't be love. The structure is nice. As for the rhymes, I think you overuse the you-do rhyming, try to be more original. Overall nice poem 5/5 |