Lies

by alwayssofresh16   Nov 5, 2007


I thought you said you were my friend
but I guess you are not
I thought that I could tell you things
but you talk about me alot

you lie to make me look bad
and thought I never knew
try to act like I don't hear
when I really do

people say you do not like me
they tell me to leave you be
how come it took me so long
how come I couldn't see

the person that you really are
I guess I never knew
but something people don't know
I still want to be friends with you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chris

    A good poem that people can relate too because almost everyone knows a person like this. I know a couple. Some I still wanted to be their friend and others I didn't. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A touching poem. Although this person hurt you, you still are willing to give him another chance. I liked the structure and rhyming, keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    I loved this poem. Except, the flow was a bit off and there were grammar errors. I loved the ending line though. 4/5 for now.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Adelle

    This poem has alot of emotion however the flow was off.

  • 17 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Wonderful poem, reminds me of one or two people, keep up the great work.

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