It was cute and short. But it came from the heart which is all that really matters. It was written nicely. Great Job
5/5

Puppy love. jk. awesome, smiles are great. so are simelies but that's besides the point. I don't even think i spelled that right. I like how in the first and second stanza you stop mid-line and go but... it would've been cool to see that throughout the whole poem but it's good as it is. 5/5

It's short, but so sweet,, You really describe how you so thankful seeing that smile.. ^^
Nice flow also,,
Keep up the good work..
5/5

Aww what a cute poem!
I could totally relate because smiles from the one I love make my day complete also.
Well done *5/5*

This is a really sweet poem. I loved it!!! 5/5

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The flow here is a little broken. There are some mistakes here and there. The subject of the smile is one that I can connect too, as I feel the same for the smile of my love one. nice job 4/5

WOW! this one is the exact way i fell for some one right now. this one is awesome if i could give you a 10/5 i would.

Just reading the title I'm sure makes everybody think of the one they love, I know I sure did right away. Nothing is more amazing to me then the way she looks at me. Great work - very heartfelt and true - 5/5 GG23