Bloody tears

by kacy bretz   Nov 5, 2007


The razor makes pretty lines
as her tears slowly fade
she takes the pills one by one
she feels herself leave this world
then come back
she makes more red lines
she takes more pills
she sings a song
all the while
hoping he will some how
hear her
but he doesn't
one line just a little too deep
one more pill to ease the pain
she is fading fast
as she breaths one last time
her phone rings
he's calling to say
he's sorry

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    I love the emotion behind your words~keep up the writing

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    I really liked how this went. The suspense was amazing and the end was great how it was just too late. Keep up the work.