Hi thanks for commenting on my poems I always check here for your poems. This one " The First Day Of School" , Is very good, I really like this line, "my lonely dreary pity week".

That was good and I appreciate your comment on my poem. 5/5

Very nice poem. very nicely written.
nicely worded too. and well thought out.
I liked the last stanza. :]
[especially the first line] 5/5. :]