I loved your vocabulary usage in this piece. The imagery it helped create was very intriguing. The way you described it was amazing, and it was nice reading a poem quite different in the sense of what I usually read. You write about dance and it sounds like I'm reading about something else. But nether the less, it is beautiful. Really enjoyed reading the description in this. One thing that threw me off was the poems structure. I thought that it could be improved. Perhaps split it into stanzas? It'll look more... neater and make people more tempted to read it. Still a brilliant piece. Keep it up!