Comments : Stop for Just a Moment

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow ... cool

  • 16 years ago

    by MissAlyssaGraff

    Hey N! Im back! :)
    And I'm happy to say this is the first poem I read when I came online!
    And I love it! It's so soothing and relaxing!
    If I'm ever feeling frustrated or aggitated, I'll be sure to read over this poem!
    Great write!

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Loved it...freedom.pure happiness...life all wrapped up in a poem.thank you.haha

  • 16 years ago

    by kidheir

    Hey awsome poem lol very relaxing and like soothing lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    I really liked this one bcuz it was so different than anything ive read before. it was beautiful in every way. and the flow was excellent. you did a wonderful job. keep up the nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by T uh Belle lll

    This poem was very relaxing to read, and I like how it was set up.

    Keep at it!

  • 16 years ago

    by T uh Belle lll

    This poem was very relaxing to read, and I like how it was set up.

    Keep at it!

  • 16 years ago

    by broken reflection

    I really enjoyed the structure, it was refreshing. Good meaning behind it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FaithHopeNLove

    What a great poem! I love all the sensory details! Its all mixed together and I feel like I am outside. Great ending too. Learning and lead, if only more people would. I love the write and the inspiration behind it. Fantastic!

  • 15 years ago

    by damont

    WONDER FUL BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN WORDS SPOKEN SOFTLY Keep writing