Remember (Part 2)

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Nov 6, 2007


I notice you so pale you're not the same
Your smile that draws your carisma is missing
I feel you so cold you lips so dry
Stupid you look not to be disrespectful

But that doesn't matter
I love the way you are
And I will never feel the same
For any other person

God brought me up
To care about only you
I curse out the day
That I lost you

It's already lost in a doubtful eternity
I wanted to create a modern light
To lighten a path to happiness
Because sincerely I don't accept this reality

A human being isn't capable
To handle this heaviness
I suffer and suffer
And cry without stoping

If you think that I exaggerate
But I do this for you
Because ithis way I show
The way I feel about you

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  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    AND ANOTHER ONE!

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    "It's already lost in a doubtful eternity
    I wanted to create a modern light
    To lighten a path to happiness
    Because sincerely I don't accept this reality"

    ^^ This was my favourite stanza. It was beautiful. Wonderfully written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Theres a lot of emotion and i love that in this poem it just flows together well

  • 17 years ago

    by alwayssofresh16

    When i read it its like I can feel what your saying there is so much emotion

  • 17 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    This fits perfectly with the piece before it. The flow goes on uninterupted, as does the rythm. Great job. 7/5